Welcome New Year 2017 Comments

We all welcome a new year with a lot of expectations and see off it with a lot of frustrations.

You are descending On the golden carpet Of tiny dusts Springing blessings.......I am reading it late still I take me back to the moment enjoy the spirit embodied in it...10

On the green branch of a tree A bud shivers I really enjoy your poem thanks for shearing 10++++++

I agree with your other readers below: this is a fresh, affirmative New Year poem, opening the next twelve months to the most positive view of the time all of us will share. What struck me strongly was the absence of egoism: you do not write about your resolutions, your needs. Throughout the poem you want best possible events for the whole - all of us who are celebrating this beginning. And the prayer ending it, which moved Susan to pray with you, also shows a faith in larger forces than just us. In a sense, what you are asking for has already been achieved - in your pure heart and the equally pure hearts of this who share your point of view and poetic vision. Count me in that company!

Just when I thought no one could write a fresh and exciting New Year's poem you come along and prove me wrong! ! ! Love the imagery in this work- - - - coming step by step In the morning light You are descending On the golden carpet Of tiny dusts- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -and - - - - - - - - - - - For your welcome Earth is decked in beauty. . Lovely writing and may I join you in the closing prayer? - - - - - - - - - I pray Before the Almighty To write In your blank pages For this earth All good fortune. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

There is such rich and vivid imagery in the New Year coming in the morning light on a carpet of gold, a bud trembling in anticipation, and the beautifully rendered blessing which completes the piece. Thank you so much for giving us this translation of such well-crafted poetic blessing.

Hi Bharati, Thank you Bharati for translating my favourite poem of yours. Good. Thank you ever! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++

A nice welcome note for another year...2017