Thursday, June 22, 2006

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I had always wished for your return
to be like that of Odyssueus's.
A little world weary,
Battle scared and vague.
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nn mn 10 September 2006

Nice read! Curious, though. In the line: Battle scared and vague Did you mean scared or scarred? Both make sense, of course, but the former should get a hyphen. Or maybe it's just a typo, for which I too am famous.

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Amanda Lukas 22 June 2006

Such is life, Vincent. No fairytales and rarely a happy ending. Endure it and closure will come.

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Angelica Abington 22 June 2006

You are such a good writer..I don't know who this is about, but I loved it...

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