Saturday, August 2, 2008

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Summer Suns sweltering heat sweats,
movement is trapped, confined
gestures are heavy effort - weighted
trickles of perspiration tickle the brow
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Jilted BUTTERFLY
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Fred Babbin 03 August 2008

Very nice expression.

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Marilyn Lott 03 August 2008

You have a unique style that draws the reader close. Enjoyable. Keep writing and sharing with us. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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