Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, September 25, 2009

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“Dear wake up and get ready”
You are air borne and heavenly abode
No use of your staying here and spoiling others
God has specially sent us to pick you up as HE bothers
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Adrianne Colton 23 November 2009

Conceded the point that there may be some error I thought of seeing self once more in mirror 10

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Nathanial Jones 04 November 2009

Very talented word play once again...8/10

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Marieta Maglas 03 November 2009

You were shame on humanity There was no use of your continuity So you are called here with special mission Call for all your misacts and admissions excellent written..a masterpiece..thank you for sharing 10++++++++++

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Lalvani Rekha 09 October 2009

“Dear wake up and get ready” You are air borne and heavenly abode

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 08 October 2009

Tempting address, novel treatment, beautiful composition, smooth flow, good rhyme. For all our misdeeds we may delude ourselves, we may delude others…but we can’t delude God…at Whose hands we are sure to be meted out our deserts.

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Suwarna Patil 07 October 2009

Dear wake up and get ready” You are air borne and heavenly abode

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Ketan Rajgor 07 October 2009

You have done enough disservice to mankind Among self centered people, you were only little kind We searched many eligible but could not find

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Ramdulari Sinha 03 October 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty Conceded the point that there may be some error

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Sita Kesri 02 October 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty Conceded the point that there may be some error

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Sangita Rao 02 October 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty Conceded the point that there may be some error I thought of seeing self once more in mirror

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Severina Dsouza 01 October 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty Conceded the point that there may be some error

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Nagesh Ratnavelu 01 October 2009

God may have his own way of tackling the issues Springing the surprise and offering the dues I thought I might be the first person to get the

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Sunita Rao 01 October 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty

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Venkat Ramanna 01 October 2009

“Dear wake up and get ready” You are air borne and heavenly abode No use of your staying here and spoiling others

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K.v. Subbarao 01 October 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty Conceded the point that there may be some error

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Darshna Chopra 30 September 2009

couldn’t believe the words as there was no reality I was never kind but ruthless and adopted cruelty

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Kunwar Patel 30 September 2009

God may have his own way of tackling the issues Springing the surprise and offering the dues I thought I might be the first person to get the invitation

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Kamli Kamal 30 September 2009

“Dear wake up and get ready” You are air borne and heavenly abode No use of your staying here and spoiling others

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Ratna Patel 30 September 2009

You have done enough disservice to mankind Among self centered people, you were only little kind

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Radha Seth 30 September 2009

You have done enough disservice to mankind Among self centered people, you were only little kind We searched many eligible but could not find

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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