Saturday, December 8, 2012

Weighty Worries? ;) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Those endless talks of giving the fat a trim
Beauty is now the monopoly of the slim!

Sinuous and slender
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 September 2018

delicious pizzas keep baking in 'em' ovens it'd be hard to keep the damned calorie count or to live in fear of the expanding waistline mount..a very great advice for all those who try so hard to loose weight....... thank u. i hope many young girls read this.. thank u. tony

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Simone Inez Harriman 28 April 2018

I love your poem depicting the woes of losing weight. I had written an in depth comment for your poem however poemhunter insists on a 10 -300 restriction and refused to post it. Absolutely infuriating after spending time on a comment. Nevertheless... a resounding 10

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Laurie Van Der Hart 04 February 2017

I see you write on a wide range of topics. A humorous take on this topic - very true that slimness is over-emphasised, and our worth as people judged on our outward appearance. But balance is needed of course. It's a real battle for some people.

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Farah Ilyas 30 May 2013

hah aha a bit humorous poem with great message inside, we should take meal according to our body need, don't take excessive stuff, do preference to your health rather than weight, when priority is given to health, every issue will be settled automatically...bravo, nice poem

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Ruth Walters 23 January 2013

haha I love samosas, not so much pizza's.... I can take or leave chocolate but I'm still a little rounded: o)))

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John Shea 05 January 2013

Careful with me for I cook all that good stuff and love when my patrons partake, John

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Ruhi Shah 16 December 2012

What a fun way to address the weight issue. Good read :)

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 14 December 2012

oh! yes, its a true message for millions of women in the world.. including my wife also... i will request her to read.... this poem...

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A fun poem with a great message! beutifaly written and very very true. You definatley capture intrest, which is good because both tons of boys and girls truly need that message.

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Eman Obied 10 December 2012

I loved it, totally puts a smile on my face.lots of young girls must give this a read.very empowering!

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Unwritten Soul 10 December 2012

Yeah too much worries is too bad for health, dont force yourself not to eat...we must eat to get energy just do not take excess food than we need to, always be wise when taking a meal, do not eat when you feel its start to full...if you eat more, then work more..drinking more water helps alot..if you eat a lot do a short jog just for fun..dont think much about weight but think much about health.._Soul

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Karen Sinclair 09 December 2012

Here here! bravo.... the battle is relentless the food so tempting....this is one close to my heart...tyvm karen

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 09 December 2012

You are right. Anyway I found in my (many) years the skinny people have more health problem then the little plump one. And when you get to older age it is very difficult to take off weight. I always believed underneath, that who God loves, he will fatten them up, so now I do not eat too much, but just a few cookie counts and I gain. So, the yoyo is up, but not too much. I know what you mean.

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