Tuesday, May 13, 2008

Weight Of My Decisions Comments

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Birds sing mock happiness
as I pull my load.
Following this winding path
not knowing where it goes.
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Julie Neises
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Ency Bearis 13 May 2008

You want a title for this poem? May I suggest for ' Uncertainty '. I think this is a good title for your nice poem. Best Regards, Ency Bearis

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