Friday, May 5, 2006

Weight Of History Comments

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However hard we try to shed
the weight of history, the last ten pounds
remain to weigh us down like lead
and spoil our taste like bitter coffee grounds.
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gershon hepner
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Raynette Eitel 05 May 2006

Good theme, Gershon...new thought for me...but I agree with Gina about the syllable splitting. Raynette

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Gina Onyemaechi 05 May 2006

Agreed! One nit: I think you can do better than syllable-splitting to achieve rhyme. Love, Gina.

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