Weight Of Goodness Comments

A very meaningful poem. The last two stanzas really stand out. It is true, virtuous people have an extra burden on their shoulders.

Beauty and virtue, Goodness and fruitfulness Carry their own prolific weight.... How true! If led upon the path of goodness Teach yourself to bend humbly... Marvelous lines to end the piece.

If led upon the path of goodness Teach yourself to bend humbly To carry that extra weight, Like lilies bend with big flowers.....touching expression with lofty theme. A well executed poem on weight of goodness is amazingly shared. Each stanza is impressive.10

meaningful write- path of goodness