Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Weevil Comments

Rating: 3.9

I dreamed about my giant shoes
one morning when I had the blues
I put them on and laced them tight
soon I felt ready for a fight.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Shannon Chapel 05 December 2005

Herbert, Very cute. I like this one. Would fit superbly in a children's book like Mother Goose or something. Shannon

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Cute as a - weevil, Haines, Jr.

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Steve Fulk 30 November 2005

Nice. You can almost close your eyes and imagine it happening.

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