Thursday, January 1, 2015

Weeping Song Comments

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There is an ancient tune,
as old as the wandering moon.
It floats on gentle breeze,
of a woman weeping.
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Alesia Leach
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 09 January 2015

No ancient tune as well as old wandering moon. Wonderful composition with suitable wording. This is definitely a marvellous poem shared in this forum. Nice sharing in this forum.

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Valsa George 02 January 2015

Like the Weeping willow.... a weeping song! Let me lie awake one night to hear the doleful song of this invisible desolate woman who could never sing a lullaby! You have succeeded in creating an air of mystery in the whole poem! Enjoyed.....!

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