Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Weeping Orchard Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Old man winter releases one last breath,
bitter March winds, leaving me so cold.
Null bare branches move on the orchard tree
Lifeless to the eye, but like the soul, the source is life.
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Jay Aguiniga
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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 02 March 2012

This is gud....and brilliantly crafted. I luv it... The modern luv is so phoney it started them as friends, they kissed yesterday. But it ended they as enemies, they cant even talk today. thanks for sharing.....+

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

A marvellous piece of poetry….a smart attempt and extraordinary effort, thank you for sharing.

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Walterrean Salley 29 February 2012

It's amazing the changes that each season brings. I get chills just reading your poem. Winter's not only cold, but dangeours too; thankfully, it's almost done for this year. Good job. Clear message. 10. I'd be honored for your visit to my page. Thanks.

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Jay Aguiniga

Jay Aguiniga

Scottsbluff Nebraska
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