Tuesday, October 10, 2017

Weeping Goodbye Comments

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At this dawn the final train is departed,
Taking pilgrims for holy visit to holy city
Eternity is remembered in this journey,
On both tracks in forest train has travelled.
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Anthony Fantano 08 October 2020

Goodbye gives emotion to separated or departed soul. Your poem makes me emotional and I cry for little while.

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Bill Khaki 05 October 2020

You are one wonderful poet who capture the landscape of nearby journey. Truly emotion is dropped from a leaf. This nice poem is too wonderful.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Goodbye's weeping motivates mind and brings emotion. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 03 December 2018

This poem has such a subtle softness of expression: I love the personification! The poet's sensibility to plants being separated from each other by the train, is most wonderful!

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 October 2017

A flower of love they have turned! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 11 October 2017

Every morning I hear the train whistle early early in the morning and from childhood up I always wondered who was on that train and where they were going.... so your poem caught me up from the get-go putting a different destination in my mind.Loved the plants growing beside the tracks and what they gave to this poem!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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