Weeping Clouds Poem by mohammad ahmadizadeh

Weeping Clouds

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You say to me in someway, pay no mind today
Wait a while, life wheel will go to the well way

You endeavor in vain my friend again
Chained pain force me to rain in the main
Gray clouds know whole my tears dry
All of them ally on the sky trying to cry

Sunday, March 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A working on assonance and consonance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2016

Paying no mind today is so sad as time is whispering in dry tear and cry. Very amazing composition is shred on pain topic....10

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Thank you sir for your enouragement.

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