Weeping Candle! Comments
Candle light; weeps to furnish,
The transparency veil; that adds lusture;
Candle overlapped by white customs;
Ah! Standing there at middle joins the lovers:
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I like this line. Candle light, weeps to furnish, The transparency veil, that adds lustre. Beautiful artwork in overall. 10+, I vote
Yeah here the light of candle makes the two loving souls ONE. nice theme 10+++
nicely ended- When Candle top kisses bottom; It looses soots to fuse fiance in strong love roots! nice 10++++
Poem on candle lights ends at bottom, fantastic
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7/21/2025 2:54:54 AM # 1.0.0
Great concluding lines. Loved those words