I envy the water
It has been from the beginning
It feeds life to keep the living living
It quenches and it satisfies
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Alice, I grew up and lived near the ocean for many years. Worked out in the North Sea for a couple. Even when I moved to Texas I found plenty to be near. This poem also touches me in a special way. You seem to use water a lot in your poetry. I like that. It has so many poetic, thoughtful and spiritual meanings.
I like this Alice, great use of expression used....nicely penned thanks for sharing Jon
Alice, I really like this pretty, lively, picturesque vital tribute to water and its importance to all things essential, including us. Yes, touches me deeply. Love it! Don't stop writing! Thanks, Carol