Weekend Poem by Kevin Eaglesfield

Weekend

Rating: 5.0


Kids
Gone
Phones
Off
Shy
Looks
Small
Talk
Cork
Screw
More
Talk
Sly
Looks
Candles
Bubbles
Cuddles
Bliss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 29 October 2008

Wow Kev. this says it all from begining to blissful end.Excellent, and with one word lines too..... very cleverly thought through... A 10+ + + from me and hope this could be from real-life experience eh? ( no need to answer) Great read.

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