Friday, February 10, 2017

Weeds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Of lying tongue,
Envy and greed
Paradise Lost,
The people feed.
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Sandra Feldman
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Susan Williams 11 February 2017

Well done, Sandra. It slides along so smooth and sweet and then the reader realizes there is a bitter mixed there in the sweet of soothing rhymes and peaceful rhythms. Extraordinary write. I love it when you sneak up on us this time not in words for the poem begins in grim earnest but in that soft gentle smoothness of line and rhyme. Amazing 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Chuy Amante 10 February 2017

If per chance you are in DC take some poison and spray it for me upon the weeds that choke and kill the common man, his blood they spill

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