It is the fortune of poeple
that the shadows
of our futures do not
lie heavy
...
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Solemn truth for all in this poem... Life and death both often take us by surprise. I will try, again, to live more mindfully with this reminder. Thank you for this (and for your wonderful book on the subject) . Love, Esther xxxxx
A touching and well-expressed tribute to all those without another Wednesday. Well done. Cheers, Joy
Excellent and beautiful, one of the best I have read regarding this subject.
A sermon in a poem. Wonderful reminder never to put off what might lie heavily on us 'tomorrow'.
A sober tribute little red one from a fine poet with an enormous heart... love, Allie xxxxx
I think that this is such a strong reminder of the love that we must try and share between our-selves, and I agree with Ernestine when she says that we must try and live without the fear, Love duncan X
Scarlett What a great rememberence for such a sad day, beautifuly written cheers Rosiex
Well, and appropriately delivered....That Tuesday, September 11,2001, which will Woe it's 5th Anniversary Tomorrow, will most assuredly be remembered with the great astounment, and sadness as long as their is a United States Of America... A sosberly fine Tribute, Scarlett. frank
They say never go to bed on a quarrel. Everytime someone goes out the door, we never know whether we will see them again. But one mustn't dwell on this, but something like the twin towers devastation makes one think deeply of how we live our lives. A beautifully written piece Scarlett, very thought provoking and emotional. Love Ernestine XXX
Touchingly beautiful. The same can be said for Sunday/Monday. Monday never came for those who were killed at Pearl Harbor. No less a vicious and infamous attack on a nation at peace. (Might want to review for punctuation & spelling - 'people', for example. LIKE I NEVER MAKE TYPOS, OF COURSE! (WINK!)
at school we'd have a memorial mass. as a reminder. thanks for this, well laid-out verses.
Excellently written poem with a strong message.10 from me!
Great job, Scarlett! A well framed reminder that tommorrow sometimes isn't... Hug your loves' today! Blessings to you Party gal from that old the miata mama
This piece is amazing _ woaow. Thanks for reminding us of the beauty of now. Pls consider reading my poem 'Let's Grow Up Together'