Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Wedding Vows Comments

Rating: 4.8

May we forever be lovers,
May we forever be friends,
And should we hurt each other,
May we quickly make amends.
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Clive Blake
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Lyn Paul 10 January 2020

Congratulations to you for the success of this beautiful poem. It is not surprising that it is performed at wedding ceremonies. Thank You

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 January 2020

Love and art! Wedding vows! ! ! ! ! ! However how many of us do keep them? Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 January 2020

A great poem with a smooth flow and rhyming about pure love and happy life. Faith and trust keep marital life flourishing and a happy one. Enjoyed very much. Congrats on being selected as poem of the day.

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Bharati Nayak 10 January 2020

May we forever be lovers, May we forever be friends, And should we hurt each other, May we quickly make amends. May we enjoy our passion, But never let compassion die, Thinking in selfless terms as we, Never emphasising I. - - - -A fantastic poem of love and faith, no wonder it is used in wedding ceremonies worldwide.Congratulations for penning such a wonderful poem that has an everlasting effect on readers.

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Harley White 10 January 2020

This poem is lovely and I can understand why it is used in many wedding ceremonies.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 January 2020

joyful loving poem penned; enjoyable; beautiful to read and feel it; thanks for sharing

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 January 2020

It captures the sanctity of wedding vows. A wonderful poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece.....10++

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Practicing Poetess 20 May 2017

Clive, this is lovely... I managed to hold back the tears! :) I can see why this has been used worldwide. Was that your voice in the audio recording, or someone else's? Interestingly enough, I wanted to recite a poem of someone else's tonight, but I've never done this before, and I'm not quite certain how to. I have only been on this site since 13th March (yeah, and a Level 6 already, in 2 months!) Giving you a 10 for this touching work which is fast becoming a classic!

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