Wednesday, July 26, 2017

Wedding Ring Significance For Me ……[ Yeah, A 'love Poem' Of Sorts, Even Though ' I Don't Care Much For Love Poems '; My Fourth Time ‘around'; True; Personal] Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know what couples say now as they get married.
I suppose, over the ‘ages', it has …..somewhat varied.
'With this ring I thee wed' …..comes to my mind right now.
But, I'm not sure it was part of any of my (four-marriage) ‘vows'.
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Bri Edwards
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Mj Lemon 22 August 2017

Now this is a great poem, Bri. This is a love story....the enduring struggle to make the ties last...The wedding ring is the symbol, but the work is reserved for the relationship...can't tell you how many people I know think the ceremony is the hard part...they discover life almost immediately thereafter. A 10! !

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Akhtar Jawad 30 July 2017

Couple may be old but a ring of gold is never old, a lovely poem by Bri Edeards.

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Valsa George 28 July 2017

BUT, I'd feel (almost) naked if I didn't put my ring back on after my shower is done. So that's how I feel about my wedding ring. I hope my story, for you, has been ….fun. Not only fun but very pleasing too! Yes, let the ring adorn your finger for the rest of your life...! I am sure she is a caring, clever and compatible companion! Let your love life flourish...! A lovely poem with such nice sentiments!

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Laurie Van Der Hart 28 July 2017

Fourth lime lucky, eh Bri? Well, it's not luck that keeps a marriage together. I'm happy to hear that you have a true companion now. Sounds like she's a plucky woman. I'm quite touched by and interested in the ring thing. You have a nice attitude toward it. What would you make of a man who never wanted to get or wear a wedding ring...? A sweet love poem, Bri. Well done.

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Bri Edwards 26 July 2017

if you find any typos, please inform me. i submitted it with at least one typo and then did what needed to be done to correct the nasty situation! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! bri ;) and i think i'll send to MyPoemList. ====================================== p.s. this bri edwards sure is a GREAT poet. signed: Anonymous

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Valsa George 28 July 2017

p.s Ratified by fellow poet Valsa George

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