Let the bride dress up in glee
And let the bridegroom smile free.
May the cupids dance in eye-catching sneer,
Hope their arrows strike their hearts near!
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Beautiful poem....! But I must also say that your enthusiasm to make it rhyming has reduced a little of its natural flow....! At a time when marriage is not given much sanctity, this exhortation to greet the couple and wish to make the marriage a contract of lasting duration has great relevance. Please take care of the word 'full fill' (fulfill) . An Ode has to begin with an address.... (a suggestion as you can go from good to perfect!)
I never thought that this poem I had composed in my 6th would garner appreciation from you. Surely, the mistakes here will be rectified. Also, to be honest, I didn't know what an ode is at that time. Thanks for the comment.
I never thought that this poem that I composed in my 6th grade would garner your appreciation. Surely, the mistakes will be rectified, and, to be honest, I didn't know what an ode was then. Thanks a lot.
i agree