Friday, March 23, 2018

Wedding Night Of A Homeless Couple Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love was growing like cuts and curves of a growing gal,
and when it became sublime she became a rare blue moon,
the ocean was in love since it saw the glimpse of a crescent.
After many dark nights the awaited message was received,
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2018

Yes, we could find home under the canopy of Mother's Nature, more beautiful than anything built with stones and marbles. What a marvelous and vivid portrayal of the beauty and wonders of nature. Yes, we are not poor we are endowed with love of Almighty beyond compare. A magnificent piece worthy of...10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

Growth of love undef calm moon is amazingly perceived. All waves decorated by golden image of the moon and silver ornaments are sprinkled by tender rays. This poem makes a reader. entirely emotional. First night for the homeless couple is brilliantly brought up ahead. A small but beautiful home with a pearl of love shines in poetic expression. This is excellent one...10

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Valsa George 24 March 2018

Thus you have gifted an amazing first night for the homeless couple on the wet sand under the decorated canopy of the moon lit night! The show that lasted for the whole moonlit night, ended with the flash lights of the naughty sun smiling above, ...................... Love these lines!

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Rajnish Manga 24 March 2018

The poem brings about priceless images crafted from the inputs from nature creating a perfect setting for the wedding of a homeless couple with a pearl of love and heavenly glace. Great use of metaphor and personification. Thanks, Sir.

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