Saturday, January 3, 2009

Wedding (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Nature's beauty bows

when exchanged vows radiate
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Jim Norausky
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M Asim Nehal 31 January 2016

Yeah very true....Nicely written.

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Love's wonderful dance! ! ! ! another ten....excellent work

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Mark R Slaughter 12 March 2009

I am new to the Haiku but this to me is a great demonstration of the power of this form. Thanks for such a great example Jim. Mark

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Sue Sie 11 January 2009

An emotional scene you give us here...nice verse

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Kevin Wells 10 January 2009

Again... wonderful imagery, Jim. I agree with Anjali. The beauty within your pen.... Good title for a book of your material! You should think about it.

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Fiona Davidson 09 January 2009

Beautioful imagery here..good write...thank you

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