Saturday, August 12, 2006

Wedding Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lipstick stains on wedding days
Smiles that turned a different way
Standing there she's waiting, waiting
In pain, but always praying
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Jessy Liz
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Preeti - is here! 12 August 2006

Tragedy on the wedding day. Well crafted poem, the bullet can symbolise different situations and its open ended thats why i liked it! Preets

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