The stars shall shine little longer
tonight, little brighter as well, for they
need to match the spark of her eyes. The
flowers ' fragrance shall have to live
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What a creatively poetic wonderful poem to show and describe the wedding feelings and setting. Great poetry. Beautifully written for your friend. Kudos. Pleez do write your thoughts under my newest poem too titled, dark skinned or fair skinned. I would love to have your views about it.
Wow if only I felt this way on my wedding day. And he would had said such beautiful words to me.We would still be together....Just beautiful work like always.
What a wedding gift for your friend. I am sure he/she would cherish it throughout their lives..
Wowwwwwwwwww yes the dance of destiny for the couple, has just begun The curtain raised once and ascended hope never to decend Right now that freedom so encompassed in that velvet box Opened, so that the echo of love and happiness resonates to others too the eyes are so full of stars O pray to the lord To keep them always shining Until death do them part A+++ dear Nikunj lovely poem
dear nikunj.........i wish someone wrote a poem like this way back for me.loved it with all my heart.it is a masterpiece.best wishes. ritty
awesome, a beautiful poem for your friend...really liked it, thanks for sharing
a wedding is a magical event no matter who is getting wed....the groom is always handsome and the bride always glows.....what a wonderful poem for your friend....
A beautiful Wedding poem..a lovely gift for your friend....10
Wings of wishes, kissing the clouds? Brilliant. This is BEAUTIFUL. A magnificent masterpiece for your friend. True and natural, this poem speaks of love and devotion. Quite dreamy too! DC
Glorious images Nikunj and I loved the way each stanza flowed o the next and the word 'shall' gave the poem that little bit of structure to resonate well. I am sure your friend will will enjoy this beautiful poem and the celebration will be everything you write about. 10 love Karin
this is wonderfull feelings came out of your heart...it seems that u love this friend :) best wishes for both of u :)
This is very, very lovely! I especially liked the lines ... the night sky has to create some space for the eyes are full of stars tonight... The whole wide world is celebrating this wedding!
I was 'bout to visit your page anyways. Firstly, a good hug and best wishes to your friend. You know what..it sounds extremely wonderful. I only dreamt of such words but it's you who gave it a shape. Of course, it's in my fav. list: -) i enjoy your art.
Yes another good poem for the couple to keep, I hope the appreciate the gift.
Needs a poet like you, just in love.. Thankyou for your collection.