We are gathered today to mark an ending. Single lives are destined to come to an ending like this.
Each of us will mourn this ending in our own way as we come to understand the changes to come. Each of us, family and friends alike, will be changed as well.
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1. Almost every cliche in the book and does not convey genuine emotion.
I can see where you are coming from with this one, but I think it could use a little work or polish.