Wedding Comments

cool used right words to tell right things........interesting..........loved it

cool you've put the right words love it

WELCOME to the Poetry World dear Alex! What a way to enter into this fascinated World of poetry with such and impressive and well crafted write! This write clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! I like the smooth flowing of this poem and I thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

new and splendid write indeed love it thank you for sharing love, payal

unquestionable poem! Great!

very cool poem..you move between the words like active butterfly moving between the flowers

very cool poem..you move between the words like active butterfly moving between the flowers

great logic and well versed, nice piece

YOUR WRITING IS Believing, Accepting, Adjusting, Bearing, Harmonizing, Enduring, Tolerating, Sharing, Symbiosing, Synchronizing, Swapping Smiling, Weeping All in togethering Finally LOVING Thanx for sharing!

yet the octet by musical tones symphony by flow of flute completeness by a flower redemption of soul yet earthly..........an ingenious write of unique genre deserving 10++++++, thanks for sharing

and finally puncturing the soul!

Simple and clear, well penned, you got my vote 10+++keep it up Alex, you are in the right site and right track...