Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Website Friendships Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flourish, flourish, what a friendship is it!
Cherish, cherish, from the old clay,
The green embryo peeped out for a play,
By the passage of time the soft green chit,
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Khalid Saifullah 16 August 2016

a beautiful poem.........................................................

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Bisma Mirza 13 August 2015

spectacular poem! ! ! 10 on 10.......

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Kelly Kurt 12 August 2015

Your style and wording are phenomenal! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 August 2015

So cleverly, wisely speculated and nicely depicted. A marvellous poem I like most. The favourite lines are.....Hide, more hide the sun is sweating, Dense thick leaves green evergreen, Veil, more veil I am tired of the preen, I love sweetheart your art of cheating, TFS......10

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Khalida Bano Ali 12 August 2015

A sweet and beautiful poem on website friendships..................................10

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