Thursday, May 22, 2008

Weavers Of Finest China Silk Comments

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Meadows, where Unicorns and Pegasus graze
Beneath moonlight Blue and streams of butter milk
where stars shine down through perpetual haze
Tarantulas and Elves, weavers of finest china silk.
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karan baadkar
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Mathanki Kodavasal 22 April 2012

really bad. Dont see the point why the words are repeated. Very convoluted and unnecessarily complex. Try keeping the poem simple.

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Francisco R. Albano 22 May 2008

fine weave of karan silk.

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Karwar, Karnataka, INDIA
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