Monday, January 4, 2010

* Weathering The Storm Comments

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A Red Poppy basking in the radiant sun
Sees deer and rabbits hastily run;
They sense a storm in the breeze
And race for shelter under mighty Oak trees.
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Paul Holmes
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Ernestine Northover 29 December 2011

A wonderful poem, a real pleasure to read, a great combination of continuity between the poppy and ourselves. How frail a poppy looks and yet has such an inner strength. We have more strength than we know, and when needed we take a stand and win through all adversity. Very well explained piece.

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Jean Dament 04 January 2010

A lovely poem that expresses well our struggle to survive with the comparison of the Poppy's ability to withstand all. Great job. Thanks for sharing. Spiritsong

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