Monday, November 21, 2016

Weather Changes Comments

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The morning's sky was clear
but soon became overcast
all the blue hidden away
like well-kept secrets.
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Malsawmi Jacob
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Rajnish Manga 25 November 2016

Flawless expression and the beauty of the narrative give your poetry an edge over other newcomers. This poem which deals with ups and downs in life is no exception. Thanks pl. Uncertain as the weather life's twists and turns take us through winding paths

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Malsawmi Jacob 26 November 2016

Thank you very much. I'm so happy to see this comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 November 2016

Overcasted! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Malsawmi Jacob 24 November 2016

Thanks for reading (I hope you did :))

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