This Earth
Becomes pain
When it rains
From the skies
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when it rains from the skies of one's eyes- - - - - that, my friend, is an awesome image and it will not be forgotten. This is the joy of writing- -to write something that will linger in people's minds. Well-done. Exceedingly well-done! 10+
Tears of a loved one are always painful, nicely painted human sentiments'
How you say a lot in just a few words is an art. A lovely piece. I'm so impressed.10
And those tears they never dry as long as rivers flow, as much as ocean hold it more...beautiful writing Ali, though it just simple but to make little words with such a beautiful poem its hard but you did it :) beautiful! .
rain from sky is welcomed but the rain from eyes are not solicited, well-composed poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.
Superb, Rain is good in both ways be it from clouds or eyes, it washes everything.10
Magnificent, Ali. I don't know how I missed this verse....To be able to touch the earth, even through tears. This goes to myfavourites.