Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Weather Comments

Rating: 4.5

This Earth
Becomes pain
When it rains
From the skies
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Muhammad Ali
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Mj Lemon 01 June 2019

Magnificent, Ali. I don't know how I missed this verse....To be able to touch the earth, even through tears. This goes to myfavourites.

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Susan Williams 27 May 2017

when it rains from the skies of one's eyes- - - - - that, my friend, is an awesome image and it will not be forgotten. This is the joy of writing- -to write something that will linger in people's minds. Well-done. Exceedingly well-done! 10+

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Akhtar Jawad 08 January 2017

Tears of a loved one are always painful, nicely painted human sentiments'

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Nosheen Irfan 18 August 2016

A succinct gem of a piece, i must add.

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Nosheen Irfan 18 August 2016

How you say a lot in just a few words is an art. A lovely piece. I'm so impressed.10

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Unwritten Soul 06 August 2016

And those tears they never dry as long as rivers flow, as much as ocean hold it more...beautiful writing Ali, though it just simple but to make little words with such a beautiful poem its hard but you did it :) beautiful! .

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Kelly Kurt 30 June 2016

So brilliantly stated, Ali. Thanks

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Shakil Ahmed 27 October 2015

rain from sky is welcomed but the rain from eyes are not solicited, well-composed poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.

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M Asim Nehal 23 October 2015

Superb, Rain is good in both ways be it from clouds or eyes, it washes everything.10

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Seema Chowdhury 13 October 2015

Expressive and meaningful.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 22 September 2015

Verily, a lovely expression Loved reading it

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