Weather Comments

Don't mind my name! I really like this poem! My teacher made us memorize it once and I can never forget it!

I like this poem its about rain and what it does

i like the pool UwU and i like summer.

i like pool UwU and i like summer.

Dot a dot dot dot a dot dot Spotting the windowpane. Spack a spack flick a flick flick Frecking the windowpane. A spatter a spatter a wet cat a clatter A spatter a rumble outside. Umbrella umbrella umbrella umbrella Bumbershoot barrel of rain. Slosh a galosh slosh a galosh Slither and slather a glide A puddle a jump A puddle jump puddle splosh A juddle a pump a luddle a dump A pudmuddle jump in the slide

Jump high in a puddle full of rain.

The rhyming was immaculate. It was a great use of word choice. Using words from before combining those with rhyming words was a bold move! 9/10

I notice rhyming words /repetition I like them

Helping scholars to understand non-sense words we can also tap out the sounds

As the poem goes on the words get longer, as if the rain is intenisfying until there is thunder.

Idk if it ok but ig it good

i like her poems i think there cute

..........ohh this is so much fun to read....marvelous...