Sunday, September 9, 2007

Weasel Words With Easy Starts Are Not The First Ones To Our Hearts Comments

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Weasel words
with easy starts
are not the first
ones to our hearts
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Sean Joyce
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Joseph Daly 10 September 2007

This is great Sean. I like the way that you have put this together. The rauses between stanzas works well as does the length of the stanzas. The fourth stanza, on its own is a work of beauty. This is an excellent piece Sean. I hope you value it as much as I do.

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Sean Joyce

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