Thursday, December 15, 2011

Weary Seagull's Call …1512-2k11 Comments

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Lost here alone, rose in hand,
powerless await; fairy and a wand.

Like a cherub smile, in same breath cry,
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Joann Hill 18 August 2017

What a beautiful poem, perfect word choices, how descriptive. Wonderful!

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Saadat Tahir 27 August 2017

thanx Joann...kind words there..)

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Yasmin Khan 10 May 2013

Loneliness, pain of the heart and soul is expressed through powerful images from nature...romantic dismal song.

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Deep Ali 09 August 2012

Straight from the heart...beautifully sad! !

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Saadat Tahir 24 February 2012

:) ....thanx for the correction..will take effect now ma'am i stand corrected and am obliged. ....be happy! blessed be sat

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Shahzia Batool 23 February 2012

it's a good work...the stanza division should be on the basis of either thought strain or structure...n if this poem is composed in couplets, so don't give a touch of quatrain form...

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Sherri Webb 27 December 2011

Very beautiful and touching, I enjoyed reading your work.

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Saadat Tahir 27 August 2017

thanxku sherri.... kind words :)

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