Monday, May 28, 2012

Weapons Training Comments

Rating: 4.0

And when I say eyes right I want to hear
those eyeballs click and the gentle pitter-patter
of falling dandruff you there what's the matter
why are you looking at me are you a queer?
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Donald Bruce Dawe
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The Predator 05 September 2024

Love the posstive community guys : )

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Lachlan Tepper 22 March 2023

Ur mom so Gay

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Lachlan Tepper 22 March 2023

I used my friends name

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tyrone 11 September 2022

this bruce dawe he making my life a living

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Bully mugiure 01 September 2022

This poem amazing

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Nigga 19 August 2022

Ijijd

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CBT Star 11 October 2022

i love CBT

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Everyone here is saying horrible things, this poem is amazing. When I was serving it was exactly like this (especially the part about the queers) . This work is so comforting, as soon as I awake in the morning I recite it 3 times slowly. This way I am able to really take in the beauty of this poem.

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quagmire 24 May 2022

giggity

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Gregory McFarlane 10 February 2022

Poo poem, octopi have written better,

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CBT Star 11 October 2022

i love drilling my

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crazy poem

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sheesh 17 February 2021

why is the poem so hard

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when 03 February 2021

why is this poem so bad

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allah 22 August 2021

stfu

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ARCHIE PESHOS 02 February 2021

shut up

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nutteer 02 February 2021

sheeesh

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your dad 10 June 2020

genuinely kill your self you , no one asked for ur opinion

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Sukyamums 10 March 2020

Honestly, you kents couldn't construct a better sentence than " fagnut" honestly go ymt

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William Wordsworth 03 March 2020

you guys are all gay

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Lachlan Tepper 22 March 2023

I agree

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Juicy ball licker 11 February 2020

Suck some balls.......................................................................................................

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allah 22 August 2021

can i urs daddy?

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Professor fuckknuckle 11 February 2020

Oi. Poem was decent. Needs improvements. basically. all these people thinking the poem is. Seriously stop. But yous are not wrong fuckwits. have good day kents

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ur dad 10 June 2020

SON this isn't funny!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 August 2019

they're on you and your tripes are round your neck you've copped the lot just like I said and you know what you are? You're dead, dead, dead......outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the day.

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Bad 10 February 2022

Poo

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ghost of khabib 07 March 2022

ratio bozo

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 August 2019

between your elephant ears open that drain you call a mind and listen remember first the cockpit drill when you go down be sure the old crown-jewels are safely tucked away what could be more.. a very good poem. tony

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Gregory McFarlane 10 February 2022

Shut up mate, go eat a slice of cake

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