Thursday, January 15, 2009

**weapons Of Mass Destructions*** (Mr. Bush Didn'T Find, But I Found) Comments

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(My story: - I am a little boy of 7, I suffer from Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome... Lol..... too much for my age....my father greeds on next door uncle's garden.. they were friends... but now..... like fire and cotton... so are my mother and next door aunt.... but their son and me are the best friends in our class....)


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Kolitha Lelwala
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Nimal Dunuhinga 29 January 2009

You speak the truth that's more powerful than the weapons of mass destruct.

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Sandra Fowler 18 January 2009

Greed, anger and hatred are indeed weapons of mass destruction. A very profound poem and one that needed to be written. you have my applause. Warm regards, Sandra

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anne adam 18 January 2009

very very nice i like it it's so cool nice work keep going the good job

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Bob Blackwell 18 January 2009

When I was a boy, they had signs which said 'No Tresspassers' and small as I was I didn't enter there. When I grew up I saw so called great leaders invade the lands of other people, to destroy and kill. I guess they didn't see the sign I saw. I am very very greatful that Mr Bush takes a hike next week, and is replaced by a man with compassion and empathy for our world. Well said my friend, keep it coming. Bob

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C. P. Sharma 18 January 2009

An awesome poem, the so called mature statesmen of the world behaving worse then children. A good use of inductive reasoning to drive home the wisdom. Thank you for sharing it. I wish that heads of the States of the world read your poem. CP

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Anjali Sinha 16 January 2009

yeah one must not succumb to these weapons of mass destruction restraint is the answer -10 anjali

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Joseph Poewhit 15 January 2009

The last line is a real zinger.

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Teresa Dearing 15 January 2009

Ah yes, the human condition on a smaller scale of war. good job T

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