Wednesday, September 14, 2005

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Rating: ★4.8

Your smile kills me
Stabs me like a knife
Darts from you like a laser
Straight into my soul
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Velvet Thorn
smile october
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Elya Thorn 30 January 2006

yes beautiful, being confused by love, great way of writing about this! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Lylyanna Pilewski 06 November 2005

i like it good one! Lylyanna

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Peter A. Crowther 14 September 2005

Alas, my smiles never seem to have this effect :) Good poem, though.

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