Sunday, November 20, 2011

Weakness Comments

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My feet stumble forward,
I walk upon the path I've been designated to walk,
Perfect to the eye, yet perfectly unseen,
I'm the lie within all your truths,
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Crimson Love
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Bella Hernandez 20 November 2011

'yet one insision, had it eager to leave, Bloody weeps from the wrists thought incapable of tears, Blood pours as regret spills.' outstanding lines! outstanding poem! those who think they're weak... really are strong just are too easily fallen in the temptation wonderful wirte Crimson! do keep it up: D ~Bella

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Dave Walker 20 November 2011

A powerful poem, full of emotion and pain. A great write.

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