Weakness Comments

Esther, I suspect this has come from somewhere deep. Curious poem. What triggered it, the reader wonders... which makes it a fine poem. incidentally, I hate the word 'try'. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

ELEVEN WORDS...PRACTICED BY TOO MANY PEOPLE WHEN THEY ARE TOLD THERE IS NO HOPE OR THEY SELF-INLICT THAT NOTION ON THEMSELVES PRE-MATURELY....SOBERING PIECE OF FINE WORK, ESTHER ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

What a funny little quirky poem that says so much in so few words! Right to the point, and well done!

Dear Esther You write from a deep place and your feelings are well displayed, don't give in, Love duncan X

Esther, you got straight to the point on this one, absolutely no wavering. Well said. Brian

Was this a poetry-in-motion submission? Has that cryptic feel from the reductionist writing... -chuck