We Work To Live And Live To Die Comments

nine years after my first comment, I'm looking forward to my end. ;) bri

i found your comment to vanessa hughes' a fishy tale and decided to take a look at you. this poem of yours is well done; i enjoyed it for it's brevity and rhyming and storytelling, BUT, if i were prone to depression, it might depress me to think you really feel this way about life. i trust these are not your personal feelings. in any case i enjoyed reading it. now go outside and 'PLAY'!