Saturday, April 12, 2008

We Will Never Forget Comments

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One hundred and sixty-eight people
Lost their lives that dreadful day
And now so many folks
Take the time this day to pray
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Marilyn Lott
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Robert Siney 23 October 2008

The sentiment of this poem is beautifully established. It isn't too sombre - I think you got the emotional flavours just right. A lovely piece of work.

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