Wednesday, March 16, 2016

We Will Hug Together And Sink In The Deep Waters. Comments

Rating: 4.9

Do you come with me now?
Shall we travel together to another planet?

Look! ! ! Far away is another planet.
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Susheela Shiju 12 November 2018

well penned dear Dev! so beautiful 10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 August 2018

In the Sink the Titanic the DIRECTOR KEPT ONE ALIVE TO CONTINUE THE STORY AS ANOTHER LIFE CAME ALIVE... DID YOU SEE THE PICTURE... IF NOT PL DO AND I HAVE POSTED LOVERS LIKE POEMS TODAY FOR ALL LOVERS OF POETRY WHO COME MY WAY AND U DO 222222222 AND KINDLY NOTE HUMANS DROWN CANNOT SINK UNLESS BOUND WITH A STONE WHY MOAN

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Soumita Sarkar 12 August 2017

this reminds me of....let us kiss and depart.......good.

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Cheryl Tutaan 10 August 2017

Awe, such a lovely, sweet poem...loving and sharing all the chaos between two lovers... thank you for sharing this with us, Dev...a rate of 10. Cheryl

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Vijay Sai R 23 June 2017

so much love and sensual treat this poem brings about

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Nilima Deb 10 July 2016

Eternal love..I must say..great mood of write...enjoyed the flow of wording too.

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Aisha Shata Mns-r 16 June 2016

amazing poem, keep it up! !

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What a faithful love! We will live and die together... This line captivates. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem!

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Kirti Sharma 04 April 2016

Then we will hug together and sink in the deep waters. When we cannot breath anymore we will kiss and die together. smiling and smiling! this is so sweet & it touched my heart! beautiful write!

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Nosheen Irfan 20 March 2016

A beautiful depiction of true love n intimacy. Love is a difficult journey. True lovers stick together despite hardships.

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Norah Tunney 19 March 2016

In true love there is never any separation Beautiful sentiment. Thanks Dev

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 17 March 2016

Longing to see such true love, if so most happy creatures we r, good work, keep rocking like to vote 10

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Larika Shakyawar 16 March 2016

Poem remember me devoted couple... I like this poem, how short n simple but take me in depth..

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Mihaela Pirjol 16 March 2016

Wow! This is so Romantic! I had Titanic, and Romeo and Juliette in my mind while reading it....as always, very romantic and sweet love from your pen!

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