Saturday, October 13, 2012

We Will Be Friends For Ever Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the dark clouds covered the blue sky
You gave me your empathy, didn't say why
That is real you reveal what i feel
I never forget your smile, your face as you were kind
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nader baheri
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So Close 02 December 2012

good job....! ! the last line was superb...! keep on poeting »so close«

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Allemagne Roßmann 23 October 2012

Delivered and pragmatised well.Hallmarks of lyrician

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Kelvin Owusu 20 October 2012

This is such a beautiful piece such bliss a line which i really like was We talked with our brains For my wounded heart you were a healer thought it was a great line

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Unwritten Soul 13 October 2012

The poem had it's pigment, so warm shade by the sun so blue and attached to heart, this is an awesome poem Nader, you have created a new poem that has less dark but more vibrant colors...keep it up for smiley poem like this_Soul

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