We Were Made For This Desire Comments

I enjoyed this one uriah

i thought it was ok until this part: We were made for this desire That neither water nor raging fire Could ever extinguish or expire. .......one of the greatest stanzas ive ever read....

Uriah, I love this. that first line is great! The whole this is what any woman wants to hear. Loved it!

Is it hot in here? Nice very nice.....whew!

either that...or he's just in heat :)) Loved the groping in vineyards line in this one, Uriah...very much the climax of the poem for me :)

You're sure in a romantic mood Uriah. Hopefully this means things are looking up for you! Great poem. Sincerely, Mary