Friday, August 31, 2018

We Welcome You Oh Dear Cloud.... ⛅ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Faraway in the fairy land
Swiftly sailing and dancing with tune
For every lover a great fortune
With lightning and spark in your hand
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Naila Rais
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Aniruddha Pathak 21 September 2018

Nowhere, nowhere O' water dried Making the land barren infertile Chucks of rocks in pile The vacuous, poor river cried Oh, we welcome you dear cloud. A lovely poem indeed,10+

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 September 2018

As we gaze the passing dove Let children jump with joy and sing Oh! We welcome you dear cloud. future prospects for India the great nation....... technology, scientists, astronauts, teachers.. a very fine poem , a deep meditation of the presence of the clous leading to sublime thoughts of greatness. tony

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Naila Rais 20 September 2018

Thanks for leaving your inspiring words....... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 September 2018

THE BEAUTY of clouds concealed as in a memory ' the petrichor we all adore awaiting at the shore for sure

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 September 2018

For a young girl I find your poetry is adorable do keep it up THE POETRY ON CLOUDS IS LIKE A MESSAGE TO HUMANITY COME AND HELP us

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 September 2018

For a young girl I find your poetry is adorable do keep it up THE BEAUTY of clouds concealed as in a memory ' the petrichor we all adore awaiting at the shore for sure For a young girl I find your poetry is adorable do keep it up

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 September 2018

THE BEAUTY of clouds concealed as in a memory ' the petrichor we all adore awaiting at the shore for sure For a young girl I find your poetry is adorable do keep it up NR

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Naila Rais 16 September 2018

Oh! Thanks..... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 September 2018

sorry i don't know how ph has published it so many times

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 16 September 2018

THE BEAUTY of clouds concealed as in a memory ' the petrichor we all adore awaiting at the shore for sure

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 September 2018

Hi Naila A Megha sandesh?

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Naila Rais 14 September 2018

Oh yes! Naila

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Hazel Durham 08 September 2018

A cloud has impact of beautiful raindrops that nourish the crops, that feed a nation. A nation that strives to learn and rise to the top of their profession is a great nation! Also to strive to help and to understand that we all need some cloud in our lives! Great and powerful write! !

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Naila Rais 08 September 2018

Thank you ma'am for illustrating it..... Thnx Naila

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Projeeta Ghosh Biswas 04 September 2018

You should publish it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Naila Rais 04 September 2018

Kkk, thnx for reading... Naila

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 03 September 2018

its beautiful...................................

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Naila Rais 03 September 2018

It's beautiful and we are the only one who are described as cloud in the mentioned poem.... We ought to fly high and make our nation proud... Thnx for reading.. Naila

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 03 September 2018

Yes U r right.......I apreciat U more to fly and fly....and bright the nation....

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Kostas Lagos 31 August 2018

Nice poem with a patriotic touch.Beautifully structured.

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Naila Rais 01 September 2018

Thanx ! Naila

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