Wednesday, October 23, 2024

We Walk In The Rain Comments

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We're best in the rain when our bodies have something to do.
Our arms might brush up against each other,
and we'll pull away.
Eventually, we just let them stay.
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Steven Aragon
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Bri Edwards 24 October 2024

No biography (yet) ? Welcome to PH: all the poems fit (or unfit) to print are here; well, a lot of them are. bri : )

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Steven Aragon 06 November 2024

What do you want to know?

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Bri Edwards 24 October 2024

Make 'wont' 'won't'. I really like: '....to stop myself from running toward you - the person I call home.' Well, it seems that you have an aversion to using apostrophes OR maybe you want your poems and/or you to be remembered? ?

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Steven Aragon 06 November 2024

Gosh, no! Its all just verbage. Horrific grammar - the privilege of a private school education. But I have nice manners. Sometimes.

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Bri Edwards 24 October 2024

ghost away.......means what? 'youre': you left out ' ' ' I'm not a romantic guy; therefor I avoid such an ache, LUCKILY. Is there really such a thing as 'ache of romance'? ? ? Hm?

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Steven Aragon 06 November 2024

Yes, its best experienced.

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D.N. Rebb 24 October 2024

Such a sweet romantic poem. However, I'm confused on the line - You belong to others. Is this actually an affair?

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