We Walk In The Rain Poem by Steven Aragon

We Walk In The Rain

We're best in the rain when our bodies have something to do.
Our arms might brush up against each other,
and we'll pull away.
Eventually, we just let them stay.
Awkward. Sincere.
You belong to others.
They ghost away when we speak of life.
Youre gentle with me
Patiently guiding my thoughts as if you were an elder.
Taking my hand when the time for words has ended.
And in my clumsy way I protect you.
Watching ahead and switching sides.
Holding you back when you start against the light.
The rain changes us.
It flattens our hair and our clothes start to cling
Outlining what they hide.
It makes us truthful.
We have to live so much in these rare given moments
We live with the knowledge our time will end.
The good-bye is lingered. Each of usfinding an excuse to make it last.
Questions. Observations. A silent contentment falls upon us.
You watch as I board the Red line back to my apartment.
I find my seat and see you standing on the platform.
Willing myself to stare at you because if I look away, I wont be able to stop myself from running toward you - the person I call home.
You wont leave until the train pulls away.
And I dont stop looking until you have rounded the corner to catch your bus.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The narrator speaks of the delicious ache of romance when nothing is assured but their love for each other.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 24 October 2024

No biography (yet) ? Welcome to PH: all the poems fit (or unfit) to print are here; well, a lot of them are. bri : )

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Steven Aragon 06 November 2024

What do you want to know?

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Bri Edwards 24 October 2024

Make 'wont' 'won't'. I really like: '....to stop myself from running toward you - the person I call home.' Well, it seems that you have an aversion to using apostrophes OR maybe you want your poems and/or you to be remembered? ?

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Steven Aragon 06 November 2024

Gosh, no! Its all just verbage. Horrific grammar - the privilege of a private school education. But I have nice manners. Sometimes.

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Bri Edwards 24 October 2024

ghost away.......means what? 'youre': you left out ' ' ' I'm not a romantic guy; therefor I avoid such an ache, LUCKILY. Is there really such a thing as 'ache of romance'? ? ? Hm?

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Steven Aragon 06 November 2024

Yes, its best experienced.

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D.N. Rebb 24 October 2024

Such a sweet romantic poem. However, I'm confused on the line - You belong to others. Is this actually an affair?

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