We Two Were Walking Together Comments
Walking in a misty night –
It was moon lit then.
We two were walking through
Firmly holding our hands.
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Hello poet Amitava Sur. Please to make you acquaintance. I have just recently return to PH, once I found a little extra time. It helps me unwind. You have written deeply and beautifully about one you love and love being with, I like the imagery and the message. Well done, Loyd PS Come by and visit my work when you have time. Loyd
A lovely poem to read, thanks for presenting it. In the lines of the first and the last stanzas: 'Firmly holding her hands.' - If you substitute 'her' by 'our', methinks it would sound nicer, but of course, the choice is yours. 'My love being held in my hand I felt to be strolling in heaven.' - Beautiful! I too love holding hands of my loved ones. I have many poems where I've mentioned it.
Walking through the misty moonlit evening, enjoying the comforting closeness of your love. Happiness holding no bounds as you held her hands. A very touching poem, Amitava, beautiful expression of your love. A gentle quietness appears from within your poem and brings a calm serenity. Wonderful poem. Love it. RoseAnn
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7/26/2025 5:13:42 PM # 1.0.0
A feeling of 30 (-) . A beautiful. if i could read this poem during 30th of my life i would have enjoyed this poem practically. Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.