Sunday, December 3, 2006

We Tried To Paint A Fire In The Snow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Red and orange, yellow
Maybe a touch of blue
Paint the sky with fire
And the snow with a barren hue
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Ben Partenay
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Sandra Fowler 03 December 2006

Memorable phrases abound in this poignant offering. I love the refrain that conveys your elegiac message. Exceptional write, Ben. Kindest regards, Sandra

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